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Bretimus_v2
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:04 pm    Post subject: Choose Your Own Adventure Reply with quote

It's springtime. Which means Spring Cleaning (read: de-cluttering). I was going through boxes my parents sent me way back and found old CYOA books that I fanatically wrote when I was in elementary school. So guess what? I'm going to write horrible CYOA stories here in the forums. Now as a notice...set your expectations low. I'm no novelist; this just seemed like a fun idea.

If you're interested in becoming a guest entry author send me a PM.
The rules are simple. First choice to reach 3 votes is the path that I will take. In reader response, you can write something down. But if I get 8 votes for whatever and none for the choices provided...you're out of luck, and we'll have an on-topic vote. I will write these when I get around to them. I expect most entries to be somewhere between 4 or 15 sentences, but let's face it...sometimes you want to give a choice instead of make it all up yourself.

The first is going to be loosely patterned on one of 10 year-old Brett's masterpieces.


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Just Another Day

Light slowly filled the small room. There were many things scattered about. First and foremost, there was dust, and lots of it. But there were also boxes, barrels, and curled up in a corner, there was also a boy. As the light finally reached him, he awoke with a start, his hand quickly reaching inside his coat. But that intensity faded as he realized he was alone. He got to his feet, stretching away the aches and pains. He wandered over to the window, letting the light wash over him. It looked to be just another day...

in the Western Frontier.
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aboard the spaceship, Phalanx.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I can't wait to see what happens on the spaceship, handgun.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Can we do what I did with CYOA books and read both scenarios then stick with the one that I like more?

No? Ok then SPACESHIP!

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Can't turn down a good cowboy story
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Guernica wrote:
Can't turn down a good cowboy story
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Whoa, whoa, whoa...remove good and we got something.
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And the comments for it were just so delicious. All of them. If I was a Red Lantern, the anger there would power my power battery for years.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bretimus_v2 wrote:
Whoa, whoa, whoa...remove good and we got something.


Haha fair enough... can't turn down a cowboy story...
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's better.

EDIT: Dan, that's the actual name of the ship from my old book.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 3:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

danielrbischoff wrote:
I can't wait to see what happens on the spaceship, handgun.

Turn to page 42.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 6:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Longo_2_guns wrote:
Guernica wrote:
Can't turn down an alright cowboy story
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 7:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry, Jim, we've decide on spaceship.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 8:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Poop i wanted to know what the readers think of this book
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Like how I'd make the skip from ex-wife to dearly departed. But that's another story.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Just Another Day, Part 2

Red. Would that ever seem natural? It still felt like waking unto a nightmare, a world bathed in blood, or alarm lighting when pressure dropped or the ship was conserving energy. The boy shivered. Dark thoughts, first thing in the morning? That never made for a good day. So on to more important business...

Urgent needs.
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Food
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Avenging your fallen parents
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Screw my parents, I NEED FOOD!
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Like how I'd make the skip from ex-wife to dearly departed. But that's another story.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If avenging = murdering spree than mass murder! I mean Avenging your fallen parents through genocide.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Urgent needs, page 2 (I see what you did there)
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Initiate slow clap protocol.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2012 11:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Intrigued by urgent needs!
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Avenging your fallen parents
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301, man.

We's hungry.
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